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"The Girl of Many Crowns" Review: A Love Story Entangled in Empire, Duty, and Quiet Rebellion

Set against the shifting political tides of 9th-century Francia, The Girl of Many Crowns by D.H. Morris brings to life the real-life figure of Princess Judith, daughter of King Charles the Bald. This isn’t your typical sweeping romance or action-filled saga—it’s a story rooted deeply in the mechanics of power, duty, and quiet rebellion. For lovers of historically grounded fiction, this book offers an intriguing if sometimes emotionally distant journey.


The novel opens in 856, in the aftermath of King Charles’ efforts to solidify his reign through strategic marriages—including two for Judith before she turns down a third, an act that lands her in royal imprisonment. From there, the story unfolds largely through the voice of Baldwin “Iron Arm,” a knight who defends the kingdom from Vikings and rebels and becomes Judith’s unlikely ally—and ultimately, her forbidden love.


Thank you to the author for the book and my honest review. This book tour is sponsored by iRead Book Tours. Make sure to read my full review and enter the giveaway below!



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My Review of "The Girl of Many Crowns" by D. H. Morris


If there's one area where this novel shines, it's in its dedication to historical detail. Morris paints the world of Francia with a historian’s eye—political alliances, Viking raids, and medieval court life are depicted with authenticity and care. These elements ground the story, offering a rich sense of place and context for the unfolding drama.


The love story between Baldwin and Judith, while underplayed emotionally, holds a timeless appeal. There’s something compelling about forbidden love born out of loyalty and shared hardship, especially when it defies imperial expectation. Their bond, forged in silence and secrecy, brings a gentle warmth to the otherwise cool narrative.


What Didn’t Work: A Distant POV and Lack of Emotional Conflict


Unfortunately, for a novel rooted in such emotionally high-stakes material—imprisonment, betrayal, forbidden love—the emotional range felt muted. One of the biggest challenges I had was the decision to tell the story through Baldwin’s perspective. While he’s a strong, noble figure, this choice distances us from Judith’s inner life. As a woman imprisoned by her own father and defying the crown to follow her heart, Judith’s voice felt like the one that should have carried the story.


Historical fiction at its best brings unheard voices to the forefront, and while this novel introduces us to a fascinating historical figure, it doesn’t quite let us live in her skin.

I also found myself wanting more conflict—both internal and external. Moments that should have felt dramatic (a rebellious love, a confrontation with the king, secret meetings) were subdued. There’s a quietness to the whole narrative that may appeal to readers who favor understated storytelling, but as someone who craves emotional and psychological tension, I found myself yearning for more depth.


A Story for Historians More Than Fiction Fans


It’s worth noting that I wasn’t able to finish the entire book before this review, but I did skip ahead to the ending—which sadly, didn’t offer the payoff I’d hoped for. The resolution felt unsatisfying, especially after such a slow and methodical build-up.


While this isn’t a book I would recommend to fans of character-driven fiction, I can see it finding a home on the shelves of history buffs or readers who prioritize factual fidelity and setting over emotional engagement.


This is a story steeped in accuracy, with noble intentions and careful construction. It’s simply not the kind of historical fiction that speaks to me. If you love character arcs, inner turmoil, and emotionally-driven narratives, this might leave you wanting more. But if your sweet spot lies in the realm of court politics, military strategy, and the ever-turning wheels of empire, The Girl of Many Crowns might be a royal read.





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Liese
4 days ago

Sounds intriguing!

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